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introduce yourself with new class

introduce yourself with new class MrWPN

I'm an introverted person so I'm quite shy to communicate with strangers but now I'm trying to improve that. Talking more about my hobby, I like to participate in charity activities because it gives me many new experiences. I am not confident in my English so I hope that I can improve it in this course and I also really want to get to know everyone in my class. Hope we will have a fun class in the near future. Thank you for listening

I'm an introverted person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I'm quite shy to communicate with strangers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I'm trying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 that. Talking more about my hobby, I like to participate in charity activities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it gives me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 new experiences. I am not confident in my English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I hope that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 it in this course and I also
really
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know everyone in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. Hope we will have a fun This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 in the near future. Thank you for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphlistening.listening!listening?listening:listening,listening;
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