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The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.

The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. NydVd
It would not be incorrect, for some spectators, that life is indeed fast-paced and it can have negative as well as positive impacts. And I mostly agree with the prompt that, this increased pace causes more problems than it solves, as reflected by the two reasons. However, I do concede that high-paced life can sometimes result in a good impact as well on our life. Firstly, the fast-paced life can also lead us to miss out on opportunities. It wouldn't be wrong to say that rapid pace comes with the downside of opportunities being exposed for only a short while and not accessible to everyone -- not necessarily true for every case. For example, if some company has posted a job online, the one with access to the internet will be able to apply for the job, but the one without this luxury, who is living in a remote area will be missing out on this opportunity. The rapid pace of life did cost the (poor) one living in the remote location to miss out on the opportunity and this can be considered as one of the issues of the fast-paced life. Secondly, the fast-paced life has made everyone distant from one another. Each and every individual, who has caught up in this rapid environment, has almost no time to stop and admire the surroundings, meet new people, try new adventures. For example, in today's life, people are always wired into their smartphone or laptop and not noticing what is actually going on around them. Some might argue that they can meet new people online, but do we consider that a meeting or a conversation? It wouldn't be wrong to say that living in the moment outweighs the online virtual presence. And this has caused problems of people getting more and more distant and reluctant to dive into social activities. However, some may agree that we are becoming more efficient and it might not be incorrect to say so either. As life is getting more fast-paced, we have learned to accomplish things quickly which is further helpful in order to save time for different activities. For example, nowadays, we do have an option to order food online that saves us time to go to a restaurant, wait in line, and then further wait for the order. Instead, now we can order online and while the order is in its way, we can utilize this saved time in some other activities (maybe reading or so). And this efficiency is way more helpful and very less likely to cause any negative impacts or problems. To conclude, It is true that rapid-paced life has some advantages outlined above but it also comes with the disadvantages as listed above.
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and it can have
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as well
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impacts. And I
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with the prompt that, this increased pace causes more problems than it solves, as reflected by the two reasons.
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can
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result in a
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impact
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on our life.

Firstly
, the
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can
also
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. It wouldn't be
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to say that rapid pace
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with the downside of
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being exposed
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only
a short while and not accessible to everyone -- not
necessarily
true for every case.
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, if
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some
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company
has posted a job
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, the one with access to the internet will be able to apply for the job,
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but
the one without this luxury, who is living in a remote area will be missing out on this
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opportunity
. The rapid pace of
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life
did cost the (poor) one living in the remote location to miss out on the
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opportunity
and this can
be considered
as one of the issues of the
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fast-paced
life.

Secondly
, the
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life
has made everyone distant from one another. Each and every individual, who has caught up in this rapid environment, has almost no
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time
to
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stop
and admire the surroundings,
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meet
new
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, try new adventures.
For example
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today
's
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life
,
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are always wired into their smartphone or laptop and not noticing what is actually going on around them.
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might argue that they can
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,
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do we consider that a meeting or a conversation? It wouldn't be
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wrong
to say that living
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in the moment
outweighs the
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virtual presence. And this has caused problems of
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getting more and more distant and reluctant to dive into social activities.

However
,
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may
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that we are becoming more efficient and it might not be incorrect to say
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either. As
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life
is getting more
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fast-paced
, we have learned to accomplish things
quickly
which is
further
helpful in
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order
to save
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for
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different
activities.
For example
, nowadays, we do have an option to
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order
food
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online
that saves us
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time
to go to a restaurant, wait in line, and then
further
wait for the
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order
.
Instead
,
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now
we can
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order
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online
and while the
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is in its way, we can utilize this saved
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time
in
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some
other activities (maybe reading or
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). And this efficiency is way more helpful and
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less likely to cause any
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impacts or problems.

To conclude
, It is true that rapid-paced
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advantages outlined above
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with the disadvantages as listed above.
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IELTS essay The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
455 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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