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The increasing number of young girls are looking for a perfect match though they are surrounded by acceptable male friends yet they remain confused about choosing a life partner. Discuss your point of view as per your country concern.

The increasing number of young girls are looking for a perfect match though they are surrounded by acceptable male friends yet they remain confused about choosing a life partner. Discuss your point of view as per your country concern. 5AOdB
In today's scenario of my country, girls are encircling by different types of male friends and they give different tags by their choice of comfort with the person. So they end up with mixed personalities to choose the correct one for them, as per my opinion girls, themselves makes things more complicated by getting number of choices. At first, it's difficult to find a perfect partner because we human being including girls have many expectations from the other one. so when they found someone as per their desires they start becoming harsh over the person or to themselves and overthink. At the end they either choose the wrong one or seek more in order of what they particularly wants. Secondly, in today's technological era people relay on the numerous kind of social platforms where they are not able to choose somebody with whom they can easily strike a conversation. Also they start having fear of loosing, being cheated or lack of trust issues takes place. For example, in India ' JeevanSathi. com' is a very popular matrimonial site where girls look for their second half but sometimes the profile has been made by their own or sometimes by thier parents as we live in a cultural country. To conclude, we humans create more choices for ourselves and later on it turn out as vast chocies of choosing the right one person for themselves.
In
today
's scenario of my country,
girls
are encircling by
different
types of male
friends and
they give
different
tags by their choice of comfort with the person.
So
they
end
up with mixed personalities to choose the correct one for them, as per my opinion
girls
, themselves
makes
things more complicated by getting number of choices. At
first
, it's difficult to find a perfect partner
because
we human being including
girls
have
many
expectations from the other one.
so
when they found someone as per their desires they
start
becoming harsh over the person or to themselves and overthink. At the
end
they either choose the
wrong
one or seek more in order of what they
particularly
wants
.
Secondly
, in
today
's technological era
people
relay on the numerous kind of social platforms where they are not able to choose somebody with whom they can
easily
strike a conversation.
Also
they
start
having fear of loosing,
being cheated
or lack of trust issues takes place.
For example
, in India
'
JeevanSathi
.
com
' is a
very
popular matrimonial site where
girls
look for their second half
but
sometimes
the profile has
been made
by their
own
or
sometimes
by
thier
parents as we
live
in a cultural country.
To conclude
, we humans create more choices for ourselves and later on it turn out as vast
chocies
of choosing the right one person for themselves.
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IELTS essay The increasing number of young girls are looking for a perfect match though they are surrounded by acceptable male friends yet they remain confused about choosing a life partner. Discuss your point of view as per your country concern.

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