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do you think fighting climate change is the govermental responsibility or the responsibility of individuals ?

do you think fighting climate change is the govermental responsibility or the responsibility of individuals? KWrjM
i think when we live together in society, everybody also have their own responsibilities to community. Especially is climate change issue that substantially affect human and even the entire ecosystem of the Earth. In this case, the goverments all over the world should enforce the stronger regulations so that people can follow to protect our environment and it is our collective duty, not for anyone
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
together in society, everybody
also
The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".
have
their
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own
responsibilities to community.
Especially
is climate
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change
issue that
substantially
affect human and even the entire ecosystem of the Earth.
In this case
, the
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goverments
all over the world should enforce the stronger regulations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can follow to protect our environment and it is our collective duty, not for
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
anyone

IELTS essay do you think fighting climate change is the govermental responsibility or the responsibility of individuals?

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