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describe both of these views and your opinion

describe both of these views and your opinion xgMnb
There are people who like to spend time with friends that has various opinion, rather than friends merely agreeing with them. On the one hand, spending time with friends who have different opinions can make more variety ideas. If your friends always agree with you, you are going to miss a chance to hear about another opinion. However, if your friend stands against you, it can be stressful, but it can also be a good opportunity to hear about different opinion. Listening about various ideas would make you to have several aspects about many different topics. On the other hand, having discussion with a friend who has opposite opinion with you can make a deep conflict. It won't compose any problem if you and your friend reach to a compromise. However, in the worst case, you and your friend can get upset to each other. In my opinion, it would be better to listen or talk about various opinion than merely agreeing. I think it is a way to get closer with friends by exchanging each other's opinion.  Of course there is a danger that there could be a conflict, though it is worthless to spend time by arguing each other and make a discussion about the conversation topic. In conclusion, I would like to say that it is good to have variety opinions about different topics. During discussion, we need to be careful not to make each other upset. The most important thing is that regardless of your friend disagree or agree with you, you need to respect your friend. Then there will be no problem even though your friend has an opposite opinion from you.
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merely
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different
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opinions
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more variety
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ideas
. If your
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friends
always
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agree
with you, you are going to miss a chance to hear about another
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, if your
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friend
stands against you, it can be stressful,
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opportunity to hear about
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different
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opinion
. Listening about various
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ideas
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make
you to have several aspects about
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many
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different
topics.

On the other hand
, having discussion with a
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friend
who has opposite
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opinion
with you can
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make
a deep conflict. It won't compose any problem if you and your
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friend
reach to a compromise.
However
, in the worst case, you and your
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friend
can
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upset to each other.

In my
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, it would be better to listen or talk about various
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opinion
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agreeing. I
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it is a way to
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by exchanging each other's
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that there could be a conflict, though it is worthless to spend time by arguing each other and
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a discussion about the conversation topic.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that it is
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good
to have variety
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opinions
about
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different
topics. During discussion, we need to be careful not to
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make
each other upset. The most
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important
thing is that regardless of your
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friend
disagree or
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agree
with you, you need to respect your
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friend
. Then there will be no problem
even though
your
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has an opposite
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opinion
from you.
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IELTS essay describe both of these views and your opinion

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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