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The increase in the amount of traffic is responsible for growing problems in many large cities and this has resulted in more traffic congestion, particularly at rush hour. What measures could be taken to deal with this problem? has been deleted.

The increase in the amount of traffic is responsible for growing problems in many large cities and this has resulted in more traffic congestion, particularly at rush hour. What measures could be taken to deal with this problem? has been deleted. OMpQM
The growth in the amplification of traffic in most major cities has led to problems of congestion in the peak travel hours. Such an issue can be solved by encouraging people to optimum use of public transport and establishing a state-of-the-art transportation system. Local authorities must encourage the people to maximise the use of public transport. More and more people are driving their private vehicle instead of public transportation which is creating traffic jam problem within the city centre and highways during peak times. People must be motivated to use, for instance, subways, metros, buses or ferryboats to defeat the growing problem of traffic. To illustrate, one of the cities in India had experimented with an odd-even project, wherein people should travel by any mode of public transport based vehicle registration odd-even number on an odd-even day respectively. This experiment reduced the traffic clogging issue significantly in some crowded areas of the city by 50% and pollution level by 18%. On the other hand, the government must establish new state-of-the-art transit mode to reduce traffic bottleneck. In other words, new transit technologies which are swift, economical, reliable and consumes clean energy is needed to implement to overcome congestion in cities around the world. Governments are collaborating with companies inventing such new transportation technologies. For example, Hyperloop is a new mode of transportation that will move passengers and cargos quickly, safely, on-demand loaded into hyperloop vehicle running underground in a vacuum tube. In conclusion, traffic is growing day-by-day in metro cities resulting in congestion during working hours. However, using public transport and new generation mode of transportation systems could be a solution
The growth in the amplification of
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traffic
in most major
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cities
has led to problems of congestion in the peak travel hours. Such an issue can
be solved
by encouraging
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people
to optimum
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use
of
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public
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transport
and establishing a state-of-the-art
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transportation
system.

Local authorities
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must
encourage the
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people
to
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maximise
the
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use
of
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public
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transport
. More and more
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people
are driving their private vehicle
instead
of
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public
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transportation
which is creating
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traffic
jam problem within the city
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centre
and highways during peak times.
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People
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must
be motivated
to
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use
,
for instance
, subways, metros, buses or ferryboats to defeat the growing problem of
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traffic
. To illustrate, one of the
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cities
in India had experimented with an odd-even project, wherein
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people
should travel by any
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mode
of
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public
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transport
based vehicle registration odd-even number on an odd-even day
respectively
. This experiment
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reduced
the
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traffic
clogging issue
significantly
in
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some
crowded areas of the city by 50% and pollution level by 18%.

On the other hand
, the
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government
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must
establish
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new
state-of-the-art transit
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mode
to
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reduce
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traffic
bottleneck.
In other words
,
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new
transit technologies which are swift, economical, reliable and consumes clean energy
is needed
to implement to overcome congestion in
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cities
around the world.
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Governments
are collaborating with
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companies
inventing such
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new
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transportation
technologies.
For example
,
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Hyperloop
is a
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new
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mode
of
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transportation
that will
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move
passengers and cargos
quickly
,
safely
, on-demand loaded into
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hyperloop
vehicle running underground in a vacuum tube.

In conclusion
,
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traffic
is growing day-by-day in metro
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cities
resulting in congestion during working hours.
However
, using
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public
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transport
and
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new
generation
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mode
of
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transportation
systems could be a solution
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IELTS essay The increase in the amount of traffic is responsible for growing problems in many large cities and this has resulted in more traffic congestion, particularly at rush hour. What measures could be taken to deal with this problem? has been deleted.

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