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The given flowchart illustrates the manufacturing of coloured plastic aper in a small factory

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The given flowchart illustrates the manufacturing of colored plastic paper clips in a tiny factory. Overall, there are five stages used to produce plastic clips starting from molten plastic and finishing to packing and dispatch. Looking at the flowchart in more detail, firstly molten plastic is poured into three distinct moulds, the yellow mould, the red mould, the blue mould. Afterwards, the quality of thess moulds is checked by the quality control machine. Strong plastic is sent to the next phase and bad plastic is rejected. In the nect stage, two types of colored plastic is separated by hands, one is individual and the other one is mixed color. Before it send to the factory, again the sorting of these three color plastic is checked by quality control. At the last stage satisfactory plastic is sent to factory for making clips and packed nd dispatched as per order.
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given
flowchart illustrates the manufacturing of colored
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plastic
paper clips in a tiny factory.
Overall
, there are five stages
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used
to produce
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plastic
clips starting from molten
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plastic
and finishing to packing and dispatch. Looking at the flowchart in more detail,
firstly
molten
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plastic
is poured
into three distinct
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moulds
, the yellow
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mould
, the red
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mould
, the blue
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mould
. Afterwards, the quality of
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thess
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moulds
is
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checked
by the quality control machine. Strong
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plastic
is
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sent
to the
next
phase and
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bad
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plastic
is rejected
. In the
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nect
stage, two types of colored
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plastic
is separated
by hands, one is individual and the other one
is mixed
color.
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Before
it
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send
to the factory, again the sorting of these three color
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plastic
is
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checked
by quality control. At the last stage satisfactory
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plastic
is
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sent
to factory for making clips and packed
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nd
dispatched as per order.
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IELTS essay The given flowchart illustrates the manufacturing of coloured plastic aper in a small factory

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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