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describe the hometown where i grew up

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I was born in Quang Binh Province. When I was in first grade, I moved into Phan Thiet City, Binh Thuan Province. I mostly only remember my time in Binh Thuan Province. This is a seas city. With extremely large and beautiful beaches. The stretches of sand make this place a lot of tourists. This place has a large tourist area is Mui Ne. Every year, thousands of tourists come here to relax. The cultivation of dragon fruit and fish sauce are also characteristics. The city in a colorful evening, the lights to grow dragon fruit are always bright every night. Since it's a growing city, there isn't much modernity yet. Over the past 10 years, a lot of changes have taken place, such as widening streets and homes getting bigger and more beautiful. In the future, it will be one of the major cities in the country.
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Quang
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Binh
Province. When I was in
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grade, I
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Phan
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Thiet
City,
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Binh
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Thuan
Province. I
mostly
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remember my time in
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Binh
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Thuan
Province. This is a seas city. With
extremely
large and
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beautiful
beaches. The stretches of sand
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make
this place
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a lot of
tourists. This place has a large tourist area is
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Mui
Ne. Every year, thousands of tourists
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come
here to relax. The cultivation of dragon fruit and fish sauce are
also
characteristics. The city in a colorful evening, the lights to grow dragon fruit are always bright every night. Since it's a growing city, there isn't much modernity
yet
. Over the past 10 years,
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a lot of
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changes
have taken place, such as widening streets and homes getting bigger and more
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beautiful
. In the future, it will be one of the major
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cities
in the country.
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IELTS essay describe the hometown where i grew up

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  American English
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148 words
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