Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The importance of so and so which always in debate among individual and it is become more controversial with many people believe that it is more beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion former view appears to be more rational. this essay will not only further elaborate my view points but also will lead to logical conclusion in upcoming paragraph

The importance of so and so which always in debate among individual and it is become more controversial with many people believe that it is more beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion former view appears to be more rational. this essay will not only further elaborate my view points but also will lead to logical conclusion in upcoming paragraph OMVQd
The importance of so and so which always in debate among individual and it is become more controversial with many people believe that it is more beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion former view appears to be more rational. this essay will not only further elaborate my view points but also will lead to logical conclusion in upcoming paragraph
The importance of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
which always in debate among individual and it
is become
more controversial with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that it is more beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion former view appears to be more rational.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
essay will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
further
elaborate my view points
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
will lead to logical conclusion in upcoming
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
paragraph
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The importance of so and so which always in debate among individual and it is become more controversial with many people believe that it is more beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion former view appears to be more rational. this essay will not only further elaborate my view points but also will lead to logical conclusion in upcoming paragraph

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts