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The importan of printed book

The importan of printed book 5aP9N
In the end of the day, no one shop for newspaper and books because the modern technology makes access the internet without money. I agree with this notion, many person find all article in the website without paying. However, buying a books is still important due to not all article find out in the internet. Firstly, I agree with this notion because society in the world live in modern area. So people modern will more spend their time to access the google. Technological advances have brought many benefits to the world. Technology has taken all the places of the world such as the role printed books. So, people can see any kind of articles in the smartphone without paying. For instance, in 2021 97% student university of Tokyo Japan study for their daily activities in college by the gadget. It is because the developed of internet about 5G. As a result, the student prefer to get lesson by search in google. Secondly, I disagree with this statement it is because dating a back the technology not developed since today. So, not all book can read by accses the google. For instance, Arabic Linguistic department of Brawijaya University choose to look for their lesson in the books. At the same time, they went to the country such as Kairo to find the origin book. As a result, the printed book is needed rather online book. To conclude, one day during the new techonolgy the printed book and newspaper will lost in the some country. In contrast, some student got the main lesson by printed book.
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of the day, no one shop for newspaper and
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books
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the modern technology
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makes
access the internet without money. I
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agree
with this notion,
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many
person find all article
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in the website
without paying.
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, buying a
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books
is
still
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important
due to not all article find out
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
.

Firstly
, I
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agree
with this notion
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because
society in the world
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live
in modern area.
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So
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people
modern will more spend their time to access the
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google
. Technological advances have brought
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many
benefits to the world. Technology has taken all the places of the world such as the role
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printed
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books
.
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So
,
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people
can
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see
any kind of articles

in the smartphone without paying.
For instance
, in 2021 97% student university of Tokyo Japan study for their daily activities in college by the gadget. It is
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because
the developed of internet about 5G.
As a result
, the student prefer to
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get
lesson by search in google.

Secondly
, I disagree with this statement it is
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because
dating a back the technology not developed since
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today
.
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, not all
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book
can read by
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accses
the
"Google" is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.
google
.

For instance
, Arabic Linguistic department of
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Brawijaya
University choose to look for their lesson in the
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books
. At the same time, they went to the country such as
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Kairo
to find the origin
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book
.
As a result
, the
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printed
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book
is needed
rather
online book.

To conclude
, one day during the new
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techonolgy
the
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printed
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book
and newspaper will lost in the
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some
country.
In contrast
,
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some
student
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got
the main lesson by
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printed
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book
.
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IELTS essay The importan of printed book

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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