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The impact to the computer games have two sides.

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The impact to the computer games have two sides. Negative because the children learn to be violence and impatient. Although this is not a common idea the computer games have a positive impact the children can learn issues like language and how to open their mind. This is why computer games can be efficient but the age needs to be appropriate. The impact to the computer games have two sides. Negative because the children learn to be violence and impatient. Although this is not a common idea the computer games have a positive impact the children can learn issues like language and how to open their mind. This is why computer games can be efficient but the age needs to be appropriate.
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to the computer
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have two sides.

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Negative
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because
the
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children
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learn
to be violence and impatient.

Although this is not a common
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idea
the computer
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games
have a
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positive
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the
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children
can
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learn
issues like language and how to open their mind.

This is why computer
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games
can be efficient
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but
the age needs to be appropriate.
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IELTS essay The impact to the computer games have two sides.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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