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The image illustrates the Bill farm in 1976 and the development of that place in 2006.

The image illustrates the Bill farm in 1976 and the development of that place in 2006. Xn1Dr

The image illustrates the Bill farm in 1976 and the development of that place in 2006. In an overview in 1976 the bill hil was a agricultural land with born of bone and other grains cattle field poultry and storage for machinery this were replaced by multimedia room recreation area student accommodation and parking however the road and the farmhouse remained unchanged. The bill hill farm in 1976 was converted into environment centre in 2006 where the road and the farm house where kept untouched. But there where many other replacement done. The agricultural land was converted to recreational facilities. The farm to the north was turned into multimedia room to the centre of the farmyard was changed to recreation area. The cattle field to the east and the poultry to the south-east were transformed into students accommodation and the north-west the mechinary storage were made into parking area.

The image illustrates the Bill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 in 1976 and the development of that place in 2006.

In an overview in 1976 the bill Possible spelling mistake found.hishimhitoilhillhip
hil
 was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 agricultural land with born of bone and other grains cattle field poultry and storage for machinery this were replaced
 by multimedia room recreation area student accommodation and parking however
 the road and the farmhouse remained unchanged.

The bill hill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 in 1976 was converted
 into environment Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in 2006 where the road and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 untouched. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there Did you mean "were", the simple past of "to be"?were
where
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other replacement done. The agricultural land was converted
 to recreational facilities.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowlawnestateorchardranchacreage
farm
 to the north was turned
 into multimedia room to the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the farmyard was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to recreation area. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 cattle field to the east and the poultry to the south-east were transformed
 into students accommodation and the north-west the Possible spelling mistake found.machinery
mechinary
 storage were made
 into parking area. 