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The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, usage of technology has been increasing over the years and created a huge impact on our daily life. The conception of modern gadgets and inventions has been boundless. The given figure show us the two stages in the development of the mobile phone. The early mobile phone is 130mm long and 50mm wide as the contemprary mobile phone is 90mm long and 40mm wide, which lightier and fits in your hand comfortably. The contemprary mobile phone has advance features such as camera with video capability, internet music player and multi-player game facility. Early moblie phones have black and white display and now we have full-colour display which helps to identify icons better. The contemprary mobiles have five buttons in the centre which is more easier to operate than Early moblie phones. In addition, we can hear the other person's voice more clear in a call than before without any disturbance.

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130mm
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50mm
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contemprary
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phone
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90mm
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40mm
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lightier
 and fits in your hand comfortably
. The Possible spelling mistake found.contemporary
contemprary
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phone
 has advance features such as camera with video capability, internet music player and multi-player game facility. Early Possible spelling mistake found.mobileMobileMolliemob lie
moblie
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phones
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display and
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now
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full-colour
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helps
 to identify icons better. The Possible spelling mistake found.contemporary
contemprary
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centre
 which is Use only “easier” (without ‘more’) when you use the comparative.easier
more easier
 to operate than Early Possible spelling mistake found.mobileMobileMolliemob lie
moblie
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
. In addition
, we can hear the other person's voice more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 in a call than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 without any disturbance. 