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The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone.

The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. n19M7

The below two appearances show the advancement of the mobile device. To begin with, in the yore mobile phone weight was 150gm as they are heavy and 50 mm lengthy in the bottom of the texture and 130mm long intense hold. Nevertheless, ear speaking an in build or black and white exhibit was tiny. Although the keyboard had a 12 switch, yet function select regulator was the Centre of the cell phone between two wiggles. However, the contemporary mobile phone is more developed with modern elements. As earphones remain the same but weight is decline by 80gm and also bottom of the surface drop by 10 mm or 40 mm long silhouette hold. Even though the display is changed in colour and camera with video capability function add-in down the flank of the part. Also, 3 regulators add more with extra email plus internet and music or multiple players with the game capacity. On the whole, contemporary phones are more advanced compare to the past.

The below two appearances This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the advancement of the mobile device.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in the yore mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 weight was 150gm as they are heavy and 50 mm lengthy in the bottom of the texture and Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "130 mm"130 mm
130mm
 long intense hold. Nevertheless
, ear speaking an in build or black and white exhibit was tiny. Although the keyboard had a 12 switch, yet
 function select regulator was the Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 of the cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 between two wiggles.

However
, the contemporary mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 is more developed with modern elements. As earphones remain the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 weight is decline by 80gm and also
 bottom of the surface drop by 10 mm or 40 mm long silhouette hold. Even though
 the display is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 and camera with video capability function This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
-in down the flank of the part. Also
, 3 regulators This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more with extra email plus internet and music or multiple players with the game capacity.

On the whole
, contemporary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 are more advanced compare to the past. 