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Failure is the proof to show that you are in lack of passion

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Some people continue to claim that their failure is result of. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Take my uncle is a stark example. Though he is really passion in scientific nuclear field over 20 years, he gave up wonderful desire of him owing to diagnosing cancer. However, . . . . . . . Nick Vuici is a case in point. Overcoming body limitation don’t have limb, he still become a swimmer and a speaker super-successful. According to medical statistic show that some people cancer continue to nurture confidence, . . . . . . .
Some
people
continue to claim that their failure is result of.
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.
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Take my uncle is a stark example. Though he is
really
passion in scientific nuclear field over 20 years, he gave up wonderful desire of him owing to diagnosing cancer.
However
, .
.
.
.
.
.
.
Nick
Vuici
is a case in point. Overcoming body limitation don’t have limb, he
still
become a swimmer and a speaker super-successful. According to medical statistic
show
that
some
people
cancer continue to nurture confidence
, .
.
.
.
.
.
.
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IELTS essay Failure is the proof to show that you are in lack of passion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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