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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.

The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. ggLd

The given Process Provides information about how chocolate is Produced. there are a total of ten stages in the Process, started with the growing of the pods and ending with the production of the chocolate. To begin, the cacao comes from cacao trees, which grow in south America, Africa and Indonesia. once the Pods are ripe and red, they are ready to be harvest. After that the beans will be fermented, and before it can be transported by train or Lorry there is two stages first the first one they spread the beans infront of the sun to dry After that it is putin a Large Sacks While they are delivered to the factory. They are then roasted at 350°c, after which the beans being crushed and the outer shell has been removed. In the Final Stage, this inner Part that is left is Pressed and the Chocolate is produced.

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 Process Provides information about how chocolate is Produced
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
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started
 with the growing of the pods and ending with the production of the chocolate.

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, the cacao This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
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once
 the Pods are ripe and red, they are ready to be Consider using a past participle here: "harvested".harvested
harvest
. After that the beans will be fermented
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before
 it can be transported
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 a Large Sacks While they are delivered
 to the factory. They are then roasted at 350°c, after which the beans being crushed
 and the outer shell has been removed
. In the Final Stage, this inner Part that is
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left
is Pressed
 and the Chocolate is produced
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