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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. QeBX

First and foremost, most people want to hold their traditions and values. They are fond of the older buildings patterns and they insist on constructing in such a way. There are also some governments who levy some strict laws regarding the kind of housings they want to build. This is followed and gives uniformity to areas. On the contrary, individuals possess their their and creativity. They try to exhibit and expose their buildings by following different patterns and work. After all, they are spending money on making that, so they have all the authority to make all the choices.

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 they insist on constructing in such a way. There are also
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governments
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 strict laws regarding the kind of housings they want to build. This is followed
 and gives uniformity to areas.

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 and creativity. They try to exhibit and expose their buildings by following This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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 all the choices. 