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For students to stay away from stress.

For students to stay away from stress. 7Q76
In the last year, people have locked themselves in homes because of a virus that has deadly hazardous. People's lifestyles and tastes have changed drastically. It caused a great deal of stress and anxiety, especially on students. Their school lives have completely changed, and education now continues online. Students mostly socialize at school and relieve their stress there, however since education is online, students ' stress levels have started to be higher than normal. Students who crammed into homes began applying certain methods to relieve their stress. Firstly, one of the methods that students first apply to reduce their stress is to exercise a lot at home. In this way, students engage and relax themselves both mentally and physically. Moreover, doing exercises provide them with both a fit body and a healthy body. Also, many scientists believe that exercise is useful in reducing stress and give us suggestions to make exercise a habit. Thus, exercise is of great importance in reducing stress. Secondly, most students feel happier and less stressed when they establish a connection with each other. Even if they cannot meet face to face outside, they relax by communicating with each other thanks to a lot of applications on the internet. For example, as a student, I feel much more comfortable when I contact my friends, and I can do this via the internet. Students have less stress and feel better because of speaking to their friends. In conclusion, stress can lead to huge problems and illnesses, especially for students. It greatly affects students ' lives, and they take many measures to reduce stress. However, no matter what students do, their stress will only decrease temporarily. Stress decreases only when students get used to the situation they are in. Thus, they should get used to the situation they are in as soon as possible. It is the only way to solve this situation.
In the last year,
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people
have locked themselves in homes
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because
of a virus that has deadly hazardous.
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People
's lifestyles and tastes have
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changed
drastically
. It caused a great deal of
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stress
and anxiety,
especially
on
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students
. Their school
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lives
have completely
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changed
, and education
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now
continues online.
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Students
mostly
socialize at school and relieve their
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stress
there,
however
since education is online,
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students
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'
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stress
levels have
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started
to be higher than normal.
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Students
who crammed into homes began applying certain methods to relieve their
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stress
.

Firstly
, one of the methods that
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students
first
apply to
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reduce
their
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stress
is to
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exercise
a lot at home. In this way,
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students
engage and relax themselves both mentally and
physically
.
Moreover
, doing
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exercises
provide them with both a fit body and a healthy body.
Also
,
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many
scientists believe that
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exercise
is useful in reducing
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stress
and give us suggestions to
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make
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exercise
a habit.
Thus
,
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exercise
is of great importance in reducing
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stress
.

Secondly
, most
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students
feel happier and less
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stressed
when they establish a connection with each other. Even if they cannot
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meet
face to face outside, they relax by communicating with each other thanks to
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a lot of
applications on the internet.
For example
, as a
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student
, I feel much more comfortable when I contact my friends, and I can do this via the internet.
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Students
have less
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stress
and feel better
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because
of speaking to their friends.

In conclusion
,
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stress
can lead to huge problems and illnesses,
especially
for
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students
. It
greatly
affects
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students
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'
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lives
, and they take
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many
measures to
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reduce
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stress
.
However
, no matter what
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students
do, their
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stress
will
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only
decrease
temporarily
.
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Stress
decreases
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only
when
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students
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get
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used
to the situation they are in.
Thus
, they should
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get
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used
to the situation they are in as
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soon
as possible. It is the
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only
way to solve this situation.
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IELTS essay For students to stay away from stress.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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