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Should government invest to railways or road?

Should government invest to railways or road? 0n6q5
Nowadays, when everyone needs to travel, and commute to work, the government‘s support of transportation is a crucial. One of the main ways of travelling includes trains and cars, and it means the necessity to an invest money into development of the transport. I think that the future belongs to trains, and I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. Most of the population see the driving much more comfortable and flexible than using buses or trains, however, we can observe also negative effects and disadvantages. Everybody own a car, and very often not only one. As a result, a car industry is growing, and it means an increasing air pollution and utilization of nonrenewable sources. On the other hand, the solution is right on hand because the trains have many advantages, and by endorsing constructions of railways we can pursue people to start using the trains rather than cars. If we do not count benefits of environmental impact, we can see positives in speed of transportation or an extra time for our activities during travelling. In these days, it is obvious that an infrastructure of railways is insufficient, and does not cover all necessary location for many individuals. After that, the people tend to use cars for their trips, and do not even considering the option of train. To conclude. I strongly believe that the trains are our future and we can diminish environmental impact of cars. One of the solutions is built up more railways than roads, and hope that the humankind will choose wisely.
Nowadays, when everyone needs to travel, and commute to work, the
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government
‘s support of transportation is
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a crucial
. One of the main ways of travelling includes
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trains
and
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cars
, and it means the necessity to
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an invest
money into development of the transport. I
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think
that the future belongs to
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trains
, and I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

Most of the population
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see
the driving much more comfortable and flexible than using buses or
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trains
,
however
, we can observe
also
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negative
effects and disadvantages. Everybody
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own
a
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car
, and
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very
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often
not
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only
one.
As a result
, a
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car
industry is growing, and it means an increasing air pollution and utilization of nonrenewable sources.

On the other hand
, the solution is right on hand
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because
the
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trains
have
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many
advantages, and by endorsing constructions of railways we can pursue
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people
to
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start
using the
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trains
rather
than
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cars
. If we do not count benefits of environmental impact, we can
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see
positives in speed of transportation or an extra time for our activities during travelling.

In these days, it is obvious that an infrastructure of railways is insufficient, and does not cover all necessary location for
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many
individuals. After that, the
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people
tend to
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use
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cars
for their trips, and do not even
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considering
the option of train.

To conclude
. I
strongly
believe that the
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trains
are our
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future and
we can diminish environmental impact of
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cars
. One of the solutions
is built
up more railways than roads, and hope that the humankind will choose
wisely
.
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IELTS essay Should government invest to railways or road?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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