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The illustration enumerates the steps in witch power is produced in the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of water in daytime and pumps the water up the dam in nighttime to iterate this process in the next day.

The illustration enumerates the steps in witch power is produced in the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of water in daytime and pumps the water up the dam in nighttime to iterate this process in the next day. pRK20
The illustration enumerates the steps in which power is produced at the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of water in daytime and pumps the water up the dam in the nighttime to iterate this process in the next day. The daily process starts from opening the bottom of the dam to release the water downward through the generator turbines. Fast rolling wings create electricity, which is led through the power lines to the national grid. Water will be settled in the low-level reservoir, then at the end of the production. But the nighttime process is exactly backward compared to the daytime with some electricity consumption instead. Water is pumped up the dam with the same generator, but turning inverse. Water then reserves behind the dam which is closed at nights to fill up the dam. With more coming through the river merge with the recycled, there will be enough high-level water in the next morning for the production process.
The illustration enumerates the steps in which power
is produced
at the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of
water
in daytime and pumps the
water
up the
dam
in the nighttime to iterate this
process
in the
next
day.

The daily
process
starts
from opening the bottom of the
dam
to release the
water
downward through the generator turbines.
Fast
rolling wings create electricity, which
is led
through the power lines to the national grid.
Water
will
be settled
in the low-level reservoir, then at the
end
of the production.

But
the nighttime
process
is exactly backward compared to the daytime with
some
electricity consumption
instead
.
Water
is pumped
up the
dam
with the same generator,
but
turning inverse.
Water
then reserves behind the
dam
which
is closed
at nights to fill up the
dam
. With more coming through the river merge with the recycled, there will be
enough
high-level
water
in the
next
morning for the production
process
.
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IELTS essay The illustration enumerates the steps in witch power is produced in the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of water in daytime and pumps the water up the dam in nighttime to iterate this process in the next day.

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