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describe about your hometown what its like Do you love your home town

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Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currently I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretty small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India.
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The Forks Market
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. Its
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I have been
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the
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The Forks Market
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. Its
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pretyy
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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Currenly
I am
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living
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the
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The Forks Market
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. Its
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town
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
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living
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near
the
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central
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part
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"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
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small
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town
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
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living
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the
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part
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"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
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small
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town
compared to India.
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
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living
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near
the
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central
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part
of Winnipeg,
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"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
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town
compared to India.
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Originally
, I am from India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
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part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
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small
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town
compared to India.
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
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living
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near
the
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central
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part
of Winnipeg,
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"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
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small
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town
compared to India.
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Originally
, I am from India.
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But
I have been
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moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
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living
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near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
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part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
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"
. Its
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pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
compared to India.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Originally
, I am from India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Currenly
I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
. Its
Possible spelling mistake found.
pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
compared to India.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Originally
, I am from India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moved
to Winnipeg two years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
back
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Currenly
I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
. Its
Possible spelling mistake found.
pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
compared to India.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Originally
, I am from India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moved
to Winnipeg two years
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back
.
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Currenly
I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
. Its
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pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
compared to India.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Originally
, I am from India.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moved
to Winnipeg two years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
back
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Currenly
I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of Winnipeg,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The Forks Market
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
. Its
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pretyy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
compared to India.
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IELTS essay describe about your hometown what its like Do you love your home town

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
525 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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