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The idea of children's pet ownership is a debate the first side of which advises that doing so had better be generalized to every single child no matter what his or her situation is; however, the second side insists on considering the factors required for children.

The idea of children's pet ownership is a debate the first side of which advises that doing so had better be generalized to every single child no matter what his or her situation is; however, the second side insists on considering the factors required for children. While the latter seems to be more logical, both points of view will be discussed as follows. Overall, with respect to the controversy over whether it is advisable that children, regardless of any restrictions, possess pets or not, the former seems to be debunked due to the possibility of not only exerting social isolation but also endangering children's health if their age is not taken into consideration as an indispensable element.
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of children's pet ownership is a debate the
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side of which advises that doing
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had better
be generalized
to every single child no matter what
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his or her
situation is;
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, the second side insists on considering the factors required for children. While the latter seems to be more logical, both points of view will
be discussed
as follows.

Overall
, with respect to the controversy over whether it is advisable that children, regardless of any restrictions, possess pets or not, the former seems to
be debunked
due to the possibility of not
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only
exerting social isolation
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but
also
endangering children's health if their age is not taken into consideration as an indispensable element.

IELTS essay The idea of children's pet ownership is a debate the first side of which advises that doing so had better be generalized to every single child no matter what his or her situation is; however, the second side insists on considering the factors required for children.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
117 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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