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The historical of Asian in Indonesia

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Asian Culture may track back in Indonesian History that a numerous of heritage that still see in every aspects of life. There is evidence of the relics that assimilation with local culture as long as Indonesian histories, but there also consolidation with other culture such as Middle East Indian and other culture that had been entering the country since long time ago, although the culture is combination with the others, Asian Culture still have stayed with their origin that inherit from generation to generation. And also there is a lot of their culture which disappear because of the assimilation with other. For example, the language is spoken by Asian-Indonesian has changed from original although there is still have some of similarity but its unique one. Therefore, The Asian culture have been mixing and combining with local or other culture but they constantly try to keep it same from generation to generation that makes Indonesian have heterogeny ethnics and cultures.

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