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people
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possesses
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alternates
 for everything. I partially
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agree
 wo5h the statement as it is said
 that an excess of anything cause destruction. This essay is going to articulate both sides of it with my perception in upcoming paragraphs.

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get
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whether
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make
 the most of them. For example
, when a person knows that he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
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opt
 a commerce stream in order to pursue his requirements. Moreover
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, unfortunately if his trade goes down therefore
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get
 financial settled as he is well qualified.

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, if experts are to be believed
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given
, the more we become subject to them. For example
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affulent
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teenager
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an
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consequently
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 of working in any particular direction. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
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has to
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hard
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, he would not be able to deal with situations as he is born
 with silver spoon and did not set any goal in life.

To Possible spelling mistake found.conducecondole
condule
, I would say that as everything has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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likewise
 getting too Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: "many options".many options
many option
 in life may lead to Possible spelling mistake found.destructiondestruct ions
destructions
as well
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an emoluments
. It is completely depends on us how we deal with these alternates. 