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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree?

Online shopping is one of the most recently developed trends in todays world. Due to the convenience and comfort attached with the concept of on door delivery, it has “spread like the fire in the forest”. As we know each coin has two sides, thus online shopping also has both pros and cons. The concept of online shopping has existed ever since the very early age, the only difference was that the range of commodities was very limited. And now there are no commodities or facilities that are not available online and at your door step. The availability of the services has proved to be a blessing in disguise for many, who have medical issues, old age, or are incapable to going out due to other reasons. However, nowadays, it has become a preferred way of shopping, where everyone is ordering things from the online stores. The disadvantages of online shopping is that we do not always know the quality of the product that we are receiving. In other word the reliability of the product is reduced. Also, the social interaction is reduced to a great extent. We cannot choose from a variety of products. As has been observed, the online spree has a range of advantages and very few disadvantages that could be corrected with minimal efforts. Therefore, it is likely that the business of the shopkeepers will be negatively affected. The hassles of travelling and going to stores. There is also the scope of discounting that increases in the online platform because there is direct dealer and buyer being linked. Thus I strongly believe that will be considerable decline in the business of shopkeepers due to online shopping.
Online
shopping
is one of the most recently developed trends in
todays
world. Due to the convenience and comfort attached with the concept of on door delivery, it has “spread like the fire in the forest”.

As we know each coin has two sides,
thus
online
shopping
also
has both pros and cons. The concept of
online
shopping
has existed ever since the
very
early age, the
only
difference was that the range of commodities was
very
limited. And
now
there are no commodities or facilities that are not available
online
and at your door step. The availability of the services has proved to be a blessing in disguise for
many
, who have medical issues,
old
age, or are incapable to going out due to other reasons.
However
, nowadays, it has become a preferred way of
shopping
, where everyone is ordering things from the
online
stores.

The disadvantages of
online
shopping
is that we do not always know the quality of the product that we are receiving. In other word the reliability of the product is
reduced
.
Also
, the social interaction is
reduced
to a great extent. We cannot choose from a variety of products.

As has
been observed
, the
online
spree has a range of advantages and
very
few disadvantages that could
be corrected
with minimal efforts.
Therefore
, it is likely that the business of the shopkeepers will be
negatively
affected
. The hassles of travelling and going to stores. There is
also
the scope of discounting that increases in the
online
platform
because
there is direct dealer and buyer
being linked
.

Thus
I
strongly
believe that will be considerable decline in the business of shopkeepers due to
online
shopping
.
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IELTS essay the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
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