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The greatest invention of all time is the Internet. Like a miracle net covering the whole planet, it helps us to connect with other people even though they are so far away.

The greatest invention of all time is the Internet. Like a miracle net covering the whole planet, it helps us to connect with other people even though they are so far away. JqKb5
Since the dawn of human ingenuity, people have devised ever more cunning tools to cope with work that is dangerous, boring or onerous. The greatest invention of all time is the Internet. Like a miracle net covering the whole planet, it helps us to connect with other people even though they are so far away. By using Internet connect devices, we don’t need to travel to the office or traditional workplace to work. In my opinion, this trend may take many advantages. Working away from workplace is more convenience for both employer and employee, because it is usually at home. A calmer and more comfortable mind will increase the effective, especially in creative work. During the covid-19 quarantine, we all have to stay at home to protect our health and block the dramatic spread of the disease. Because of the risk catching the disease, we have to reduce all the interactions face-to-face with the others. On the other side, this norm still has some disadvantages. Some workers waste their time on interests or others activities. Without urge from their boss, it is quite hard to completely concentrate on their work while home is a place full of lure. It will take more time to complete a task than usual. The productivy is reduced.
Since the dawn of human ingenuity,
people
have devised ever more cunning tools to cope with
work
that is
dangerous
, boring or onerous. The greatest invention of all time is the Internet. Like a miracle net covering the whole planet, it
helps
us to connect with other
people
even though
they are
so
far away. By using Internet connect devices, we don’t need to travel to the office or traditional workplace to
work
. In my opinion, this trend may take
many
advantages.

Working away from workplace is more convenience for both employer and employee,
because
it is
usually
at home. A calmer and more comfortable mind will increase the effective,
especially
in creative
work
. During the
covid-19
quarantine, we all
have to
stay at home to protect our health and block the dramatic spread of the disease.
Because
of the
risk
catching the disease, we
have to
reduce
all the interactions face-to-face with the others.

On the other side, this norm
still
has
some
disadvantages.
Some
workers waste their time on interests or others activities. Without urge from their boss, it is quite
hard
to completely concentrate on their
work
while home is a place full of lure. It will take more time to complete a task than usual. The
productivy
is
reduced
.
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IELTS essay The greatest invention of all time is the Internet. Like a miracle net covering the whole planet, it helps us to connect with other people even though they are so far away.

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