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The graphs show monthly prices of rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam between 2012 and 2015

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The two line graphs give information about the cost of rice changed in different month between 2021 and 2015 in Vietnam and Thailand. Overall, it is obvious that in the beginning of two years the prices of rice in two countries was highly. Moreover, the general price in Thailand outstanding during the period given. In 2012, the fee of rice in Vietnam started with 150 US, it was continuous stay stable through the year. There was slightly went up roughly 175 per tonnes, in the end of the year. Meanwhile, the finger of cost in another country was the highest approximately 400 US in February. In addition, it was also decreased at 350 in next month, yet its still the highest and unchanged until December. Throughout the year 2013, the price of rice in Vietnam was sold at 75 per tonne, then gradually rose about 140 US. Although the cost of pice in Vietnam shorter, the fee in Thailand was significantly went down from 300 to 200 US. By the side year, the cost of rice exporter in Thailand dramatically declined from US 150 to US 100, whereas the rates of rice’s price slowly increased reach at 120 US. In January 2015 the price per tonne of Thailand flutuante between 50 to 75 US. The fee of price in Vietnam slightly unchanged until reaching at 50 US.
The two line graphs give information about the
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month between 2021 and 2015 in Vietnam and Thailand.

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, it is obvious that in the beginning of two years the
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prices
of
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rice
in two countries was
highly
.
Moreover
, the general
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price
in Thailand outstanding during the period
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.

In 2012, the fee of
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rice
in Vietnam
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started
with 150 US, it was continuous stay stable through the
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year
. There was
slightly
went up roughly 175 per tonnes, in the
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end
of the
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year
. Meanwhile, the finger of
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cost
in another country was the highest approximately 400 US in February.
In addition
, it was
also
decreased at 350 in
next
month,
yet
its
still
the highest and unchanged until December. Throughout the
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year
2013, the
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price
of
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rice
in Vietnam
was sold
at 75 per tonne, then
gradually
rose about 140 US. Although the
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cost
of
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pice
in Vietnam shorter, the fee in Thailand was
significantly
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went
down from 300 to 200 US.

By the side
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year
, the
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cost
of
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rice
exporter in Thailand
dramatically
declined from US 150 to US 100, whereas the rates of
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rice’s
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price
slowly
increased reach at 120 US. In January 2015 the
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price
per tonne of Thailand
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flutuante
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between 50 to 75
US. The fee of
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in Vietnam
slightly
unchanged until reaching at 50 US.
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IELTS essay The graphs show monthly prices of rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam between 2012 and 2015

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