The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 v.1
The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 v. 1
During successive waves of globalization, the issue of a person to become successful in today’s world do not necessarily depend on a university degree or other academic institution has ignited public attention from time to time. In my humble opinion, I partly agree with the view and this essay will seek to examine the complex issue.
On the one hand, I would like to point out the fact that there are several advantages of the issue. First of all, university education is a great platform in learning. If you attended university, you will get valuable knowledge and good partnership for your life. Also university is the great place to find your ambition or destination. Moreover, university education is essential if you want to have a career in a profession such as engineering, law and medicine. To become your dream to come true you will need a degree or certificate. So, if you want to have a professional life, the university will support you.
In spite of these negative effects on the other hand, I would like to express on an equal view that the current education cannot help to achieve success. Some people say, if the education cannot help to achieve success. Some people say, if you attended the university or you have a great marks, you can be more intelligence person. That is not true. Intelligence cannot be measured with good marks or grades, but with the use of brain. For example, Mark Elliot Zuckerberg the founder and CEO of Facebook who dropped out of college but he have a successful life. Because of his self-improvement. Furthermore, some people have their created their successful life. For instance, the entertainment zone or sport field can achieve name and success. Thus, university education does not generally support to achieve success.
To conclude, having both sides of opinion considered, both bright and dark sides occupy each face of any issue. In my humble opinion, a person to become successful does not necessarily depend on a weak education system. Therefore, you are graduation or under graduated is not matter. Your success depends on your talent.
During successive waves of globalization, the issue of a person to become
successful
in
today
’s world do not
necessarily
depend on a
university
degree or other academic institution has ignited public attention from time to time. In my humble opinion, I partly
agree
with the view and this essay will seek to examine the complex issue.
On the one hand, I would like to point out the fact that there are several advantages of the issue.
First of all
,
university
education
is a great platform in learning. If you attended
university
, you will
get
valuable knowledge and
good
partnership for your
life
.
Also
university
is the great place to find your ambition or destination.
Moreover
,
university
education
is essential if you want to have a career in a profession such as engineering, law and medicine. To become your dream to
come
true you will need a degree or certificate.
So
, if you want to have a professional
life
, the
university
will support you.
In spite of
these
negative
effects
on the other hand
, I would like to express on an equal view that the
current
education
cannot
help
to
achieve
success
.
Some
people
say, if the
education
cannot
help
to
achieve
success
.
Some
people
say, if you attended the
university
or you have a great marks, you can be more intelligence person.
That is
not true. Intelligence cannot
be measured
with
good
marks or grades,
but
with the
use
of brain.
For example
, Mark Elliot Zuckerberg the founder and CEO of Facebook who dropped out of college
but
he
have
a
successful
life
.
Because
of his self-improvement.
Furthermore
,
some
people
have their created their
successful
life
.
For instance
, the entertainment zone or sport field can
achieve
name and
success
.
Thus
,
university
education
does not
generally
support to
achieve
success.
To conclude
, having both sides of opinion considered, both bright and dark sides occupy each face of any issue. In my humble opinion, a person to become
successful
does not
necessarily
depend on a weak
education
system.
Therefore
, you are graduation or under graduated is not matter. Your
success
depends on your talent.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes