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The government should pay for colleges and universities. Education should be free for everybody.

The government should pay for colleges and universities. Education should be free for everybody. m15Lq
The ideal is the government providing free education since kindergarten to college/university to all their citizens. However from my point of view, higher education is costly and requires a massive amount of investment. Thus, it will be a huge financial burden for the government to deal with and the state might be broken on the long run. To begin with, nowadays most of the countries are going through economic issues generated by the global down economy. Some countries are having hard time to grant their citizens pensions and even to keep offering a decent universal health care system for th. . .
The ideal is the
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government
providing free education since kindergarten to college/university to all their citizens.
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However
from my point of view, higher education is costly and requires a massive amount of investment.
Thus
, it will be a huge financial burden for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to deal with and the state might
be broken
on the long run.

To
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begin
with, nowadays most of the countries are going through economic issues generated by the global down economy.
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Some
countries are having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
time to grant their citizens pensions and even to
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keep
offering a decent universal health care system for
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IELTS essay The government should pay for colleges and universities. Education should be free for everybody.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
102 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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