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Job satisfaction is more important than making a lot of money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Job satisfaction is more important than making a lot of money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 7apW2

Nowadays, money plays a crucial role in our life. Money can “open up a lot of doors” such as a better living standard, opportunity in attending good and private schools and it also enable us to acquire high end brand products as well. However, from my point of view, job satisfaction is even more important because it enables people to really enjoy what they are tailored to do and have a more fulfilled career. To begin with, normally high salary saves people from their financial stress. However, high wages also come along with demanding job and stressful work environment. Therefore, in th. . .

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