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The government is pending a lot of money spend on explore other planets for living most of the individuals think that it is only wastage of money and they spend on other public things To what extent do you agree or disagree

The government is pending a lot of money spend on explore other planets for living most of the individuals think that it is only wastage of money and they spend on other public things dkEeK
In this contemporary world, everyone want to explore other planets to get knowledge whether some masses seems that, which expenditure authorities spend on these type of activities, this is just a wastage of money instead of this they can utilise their money to improves quality of lives of their dwellers. I partially agree with this notion since it has both merits and demerits. Commencing with the first side, I advocate regime should invest their money on planets research. First of all, they can get knowledge about other planets as well as their life cycle. To means that individuals can easily know about the possibility of life on planets of human beings. Therefore, government spend hafty amounts on experiments, which will be more worthwhile for people. As a result, the holistic growth of nation would be climbed. To examplify it, global warming will be increased in significant part of the world, which puts an adverse impact on individuals. If researchers find other planets for living purposes, they will save their lives from rise in temperature.
In this contemporary world, everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to explore other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
planets
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
knowledge whether
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
masses
You should probably use "seem".
seems
that, which expenditure authorities spend on these type of activities, this is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a wastage of money
instead
of this they can
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utilise
their money to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
quality of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of their dwellers. I
partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this notion since it has both merits and demerits. Commencing with the
first
side, I advocate regime should invest their money on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
planets
research.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
knowledge about other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
planets
as well
as their life cycle. To means that individuals can
easily
know about the possibility of life on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
planets
of human beings.
Therefore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
spend
Possible spelling mistake found.
hafty
amounts on experiments, which will be more worthwhile for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
As a result
, the holistic growth of nation would
be climbed
. To
Possible spelling mistake found.
examplify
it, global warming will
be increased
in significant part of the world, which puts an adverse impact on individuals. If researchers find other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
planets
for living purposes, they will save their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
from rise in temperature.
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IELTS essay The government is pending a lot of money spend on explore other planets for living most of the individuals think that it is only wastage of money and they spend on other public things

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