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The number of ways in which companies use, advertising increasing every day. In my opinion, this is a negative development that directs people to the wrong side due to the possibility of transforming advertisements into cheat. Nowadays, businesses life is quite widespread in the world. By the reason of this, many sectors became highly competitive. For instance, most countries do not accept a monopoly in any sector according to laws. This idea settles up a clean area to grow multiple companies in a sector. These firms are in a kind of race with them. According to them, the main key of the cup in this race is advertising because all firms want more customers and advertisements provide a connection from the product to people. When a manager feels unsatisfied about sales or customers, they think the poor point is lack of advertisements instead of the quality of the product they try to sell. The request of getting more sales may carry advertisement ways to the unethical point. Companies use different emphasizing and manipulating technics for a long time however, we started to see more unrealistic or deceptive arguments about products in advertisements in recent years. These arguments create hopeful ideas before buying nevertheless sometimes these ideas do not live too much time. When the problem happens after buying, ideas change as regret. In long term, the company can have problems with the after-sales support department also these regret of old customers damage the brand quality of the firm. To sum up, it is clear that companies use emphasizing and manipulating methods on top of it, fake-advertising is becoming widespread day by day. I believe this process harms both customers and companies in long term. To prevent that, governments can regulate laws according to this.
The number of ways in which
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companies
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use
, advertising increasing every day. In my opinion, this is a
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negative
development that directs
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people
to the
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wrong
side due to the possibility of transforming
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advertisements
into cheat.

Nowadays, businesses life is quite widespread in the world. By the reason of this,
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many
sectors became
highly
competitive.
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, most countries do not accept a monopoly in any sector according to laws. This
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idea
settles up a clean area to grow multiple
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companies
in a sector. These firms are in a kind of race with them. According to them, the main key of the cup in this race is advertising
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because
all firms want more
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customers
and
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advertisements
provide a connection from the product to
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people
. When a manager feels unsatisfied about sales or
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customers
, they
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think
the poor point is lack of
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advertisements
instead
of the quality of the product they try to sell.

The request of getting more sales may carry
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advertisement
ways to the unethical point.
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Companies
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use
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different
emphasizing and manipulating
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for a long time
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, we
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started
to
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see
more unrealistic or deceptive arguments about products in
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advertisements
in recent years. These arguments create hopeful
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ideas
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before
buying
nevertheless
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sometimes
these
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do not
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too much time. When the problem happens after buying,
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ideas
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as regret. In long term, the
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company
can have problems with the after-sales support department
also
these regret of
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old
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customers
damage the brand quality of the firm.

To sum up, it is
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clear
that
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companies
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use
emphasizing and manipulating methods on top of it, fake-advertising is becoming widespread day by day. I believe this process harms both
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customers
and
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companies
in long term. To
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prevent
that,
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governments
can regulate laws according to this.
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IELTS essay konumu yazmak istemiyorum çünkü bakmak istdiğim şey takrarlanan kelimler falan

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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