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I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the Earth’s natural green reserves purify its atmosphere and functions synonymously as that of the mammalian lungs. I also advocate the view that, forest destruction will ruin our present world.

I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the Earth’s natural green reserves purify its atmosphere and functions synonymously as that of the mammalian lungs. I also advocate the view that, forest destruction will ruin our present world. 8GMdl
I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the Earth’s natural green reserves purify its atmosphere and functions synonymously as that of the mammalian lungs. I also advocate the view that, forest destruction will ruin our present world. Firstly, from our basic knowledge of plant physiology, it can be restated that, plants by the process of photosynthesis convert the harmful carbon-dioxide gas into Oxygen, without which life cannot exist. Thus in a wider perspective, it can be stated that, the earth’s forests purify the atmosphere and thereby help in sustaining life. Secondly, environmentalists have proven that, the rapid destruction of forests is also a leading cause of global warming. Hence, destruction of the natural green reserves may lead to such a surge in the global temperature that agricultural land may become arid, leading to wide spread famine and deaths. Thirdly, forests also house diverse forms of life and these would become extinct if we continue to destroy their natural habitats. Furthermore, scientific research have proven that forest ecosystem act as natural scavengers and by the process of biodegradation, forest ecology helps in producing crude oil, which fuels our modern world and its unavailability is unimaginable as this will directly catalyse a global economic crisis. Finally forests are also source of numerous medicinal plants, from which varieties of modern medicines are produced; Quinine, an antimalarial drug, produced from the barks of Cinchona trees is the best possible example. Hence forest destruction will also be a bane for the medical community. Thus the harmony of the present wonderful will be ruined if our natural green reserves are continuously destroyed and there is a theoretical possibility that the blue planet might become lifeless if these green lungs are totally wiped out.
I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the Earth’s
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natural
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green
reserves purify its atmosphere and functions
synonymously
as that of the mammalian lungs. I
also
advocate the view that,
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forest
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destruction
will ruin our present world.

Firstly
, from our basic knowledge of plant physiology, it can
be restated
that, plants by the process of photosynthesis convert the harmful carbon-dioxide gas into Oxygen, without which life cannot exist.
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Thus
in a wider perspective, it can
be stated
that, the earth’s
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forests
purify the atmosphere and thereby
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in sustaining life.
Secondly
, environmentalists have proven that, the rapid
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destruction
of
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forests
is
also
a leading cause of global warming.
Hence
,
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destruction
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
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green
reserves may lead to such a surge in the global temperature that agricultural land may become arid, leading to wide spread famine and deaths.
Thirdly
,
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forests
also
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house
diverse forms of life and these would become extinct if we continue to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
their
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natural
habitats.

Furthermore
, scientific research have proven that
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forest
ecosystem act as
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natural
scavengers and by the process of biodegradation,
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forest
ecology
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in producing crude oil, which fuels our modern world and its unavailability is unimaginable as this will
directly
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catalyse
a global economic crisis.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Finally
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forests
are
also
source of numerous medicinal plants, from which varieties of modern medicines
are produced
; Quinine, an antimalarial drug, produced from the barks of Cinchona trees is the best possible example.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
destruction
will
also
be a bane for the medical community.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
the harmony of the present wonderful will
be ruined
if our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
green
reserves are
continuously
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
and there is a theoretical possibility that the blue planet might become lifeless if these
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green
lungs are
totally
wiped out.
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IELTS essay I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the Earth’s natural green reserves purify its atmosphere and functions synonymously as that of the mammalian lungs. I also advocate the view that, forest destruction will ruin our present world.

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