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The given plans depict how the site of an airport shifts from now to the redevelopment next ye

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The given plans depict how the site of an airport shifts from now to the redevelopment next year. Overall, there will have been some major changes regarding the facilities being added, relocation, replacement. As can be seen clearly from these photos that soon, the airport will be adding more gates to avoid the crowded situation in detail 10 gates for this next year. Moreover, the public transport will be changed from walkway to sky train and relocated the position. In terms of the middle area, people who have demand FOR SHOPPING CAN PAY A VISIT TO THOSE ADDITIONAL ONES WHICH have been constructed for departure gates. On the other hand, securities sites, passport control will remain in the same position for both the main gates. Turning into the facilities improvements. The check-in site will be made room for the bag-drop which FACILITATES ( easier way ) the passengers to pass luggage to the airport services. Moreover, CAFEs belonging to the right-hand side will be relocated to the top left-hand side of departures, also THERE WILL BE more gates added to both main areas. In terms of the arrivals, mores services will have been carried out such as ATM being established, CAFÉ will be opened in the next year, and especially having the car hire services for clients EDITTING BY WILL:
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plans depict how the site of an airport shifts from
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now
to the redevelopment
next
year.

Overall
, there will have been
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some
major
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changes
regarding the facilities being
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added
, relocation, replacement.

As can be
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seen
clearly
from these photos that
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soon
, the airport will be adding more
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gates
to avoid the crowded situation in detail 10
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gates
for this
next
year.
Moreover
, the public transport will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
from walkway to sky train and relocated the position. In terms of the middle area,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who have demand FOR SHOPPING CAN PAY A VISIT TO THOSE ADDITIONAL ONES WHICH have
been constructed
for departure
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gates
.
On the other hand
, securities sites, passport control will remain in the same position for both the main gates.

Turning into the facilities improvements. The
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check
-in site will
be made
room for the bag-drop which FACILITATES
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(
easier way
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)
the passengers to pass luggage to the airport services.
Moreover
,
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CAFEs
belonging to the right-hand side will
be relocated
to the top
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left
-hand side of departures,
also
THERE WILL BE more
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gates
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to both main areas. In terms of the arrivals, mores services will have
been carried
out such as ATM
being established
, CAFÉ will
be opened
in the
next
year, and
especially
having the car hire services for clients

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IELTS essay The given plans depict how the site of an airport shifts from now to the redevelopment next ye

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  American English
4 paragraphs
220 words
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