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The given picture illustrates the statistic of prices of liquid water in different 5 cities of one country.

The given picture illustrates the statistic of prices of liquid water in different 5 cities of one country. m57GA
The given picture illustrates the statistic of prices of liquid water in different 5 cities of one country. Usage charges per kiloliter were parted in terms of amount of kiloliter: first category shows costs up to 125 KL, while second fraction illustrate fees over 125 KL. Overall, the highest costs per kiloliter in groups of over 125 kiloliter and bills per household belongs to Perth city, there are 1. 50 and 332 dollars respectively. Also, the lower prices such as 0. 78 and 253 dollars in two latest sections respectively belong to Melbourn, while in the first category the minimal charges referred to Perth and Adelaide cities. It can be easily observed that there are cities which might show high and low fees simultaneously in two sections. Also, there are cities with permanent costs in two categories. It is clearly seen that in cities of Brisbane, Sydney and Melbourne fees in two sections made up the same indicator.
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of one country. Usage charges per kiloliter
were parted
in terms of amount of kiloliter:
first
category
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costs up to 125 KL, while second fraction illustrate fees over 125 KL.

Overall
, the highest costs per kiloliter in groups of over 125 kiloliter and bills per household belongs to Perth city, there are 1. 50 and 332 dollars
respectively
.

Also
, the lower prices such as 0. 78 and 253 dollars in two latest sections
respectively
belong to
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Melbourn
, while in the
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easily
observed that there are
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which might
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high and low fees
simultaneously
in two sections.
Also
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cities
with permanent costs in two categories. It is
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that in
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of Brisbane, Sydney and Melbourne fees in two sections made up the same indicator.
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IELTS essay The given picture illustrates the statistic of prices of liquid water in different 5 cities of one country.

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