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Some people believe that public transport is the best way to commute to one place while others said it is not option

Some people believe that public transport is the best way to commute to one place while others said it is not option DaxM7
It is believed that public transport is the best way to go from one place to another whereas according to some people's thinking it is not the best means. In this essay, it will be depicted positive and negative sides of it It is safe to say that there are some positive and negative sides of public transport. One reason utilizing from public transport is environmentally friendly. Most private transports damage atmosphere and produces more carbon dioxide and exhaust fumes. When it is used from public transport nature is given more opportunity to refresh itself and produce more oxygen which is one of main resources of survival human and other living things by reducing air pollution. Most importantly, using from public transport can reduce traffic jam and car accidents. Nowadays it is commonly seen that traffic jam is usual state, at most urban areas. As a consequence of being traffic jam people do not manage to go somewhere on their target time. It is very sorrowful to say that car accident causes to end some of people's life. It is so misfortune for the closes of the casualty. It would be the best way to reduce such phenomena to utilize from public transport. Futhermore, utilizing from public transport is one of the wise choice to save money. For instance, when people use a bus they just pay for the ticket and then do not think about other transport fees while if you use your car there are more transport expenditures such as more fuel and wearing out of tires and the motor and so on. On the other hand, there are negotive sides of using of public transport. In the first place, some people may feel uncomfortable condition when they are travelling by public transport whereas when they are in their cars they can have an amazing time without disturbance. While they are driving they can operate some options such as listening to their favourite songs, employing the air condition in hot weather and so on. Another reason not to choose public transport is unreliable not strict in terms of time. People may be late when they make plan to arrive in some certain time. Futhermore, crowded people may cause to spread some harmful infection. A vivid instance for this is covid 19, which majority people were damaged while they were making use of public transport. Therefore, most people prefer to drive their own transport. The next reason why some people would rather use is that speed. According to some people driving very fast is a type of entertainment. Even though they are under risk during driving very fast nevertheless they do. Unfortunately, public transport can not present such a marvellous enjoyment that private one can Overall, there are some anvantageous and disadvantageous of public transport.
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is believed
that
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is the best way to go from one place to another whereas according to
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's thinking it is not the best means. In this essay, it will
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positive
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and
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sides of
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. One reason utilizing from
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public
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is
environmentally
friendly. Most private
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damage atmosphere and produces more carbon dioxide and exhaust fumes. When it is
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used
from
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nature is
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given
more opportunity to refresh itself and produce more oxygen which is one of main resources of survival human and other living things by reducing air pollution. Most
importantly
, using from
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public
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can
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reduce
traffic jam and
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car
accidents. Nowadays it is
commonly
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seen
that traffic jam is usual state, at most urban areas.
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a consequence of being traffic jam
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do not manage to go somewhere on their target
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time
. It is
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sorrowful to say that
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accident causes to
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end
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some
of
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's life. It is
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misfortune for the closes of the casualty.
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It
would be the best way to
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such phenomena to utilize from
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.
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Futhermore
, utilizing from
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public
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is one of the wise choice to save money.
For instance
, when
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people
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use
a bus they
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pay for the ticket and then do not
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think
about other
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fees while if you
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use
your
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car
there are more
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expenditures such as more fuel and wearing out of tires and the motor and
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so
on.

On the other hand
, there are
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negotive
sides of using of
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public
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. In the
first
place,
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some
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may feel uncomfortable condition when they are travelling by
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public
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transport
whereas when they are in their
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cars
they can have an amazing
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time
without disturbance. While they are driving they can operate
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some
options such as listening to their
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favourite
songs, employing the air condition in hot weather and
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so
on. Another reason not to choose
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public
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transport
is unreliable not strict in terms of
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time
.
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may be late when they
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make
plan to arrive in
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some
certain
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time
.
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Futhermore
, crowded
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people
may cause to spread
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some
harmful infection. A vivid instance for this is
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covid 19
, which majority
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people
were damaged
while they were making
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use
of
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public
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.
Therefore
, most
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people
prefer to drive their
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own
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. The
next
reason why
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people
would
rather
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use
is that speed. According to
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driving
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fast
is a type of entertainment.
Even though
they are under
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during driving
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nevertheless
they do. Unfortunately,
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can not present such a
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marvellous
enjoyment that private one can

Overall
, there are
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anvantageous
and disadvantageous of
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IELTS essay Some people believe that public transport is the best way to commute to one place while others said it is not option

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
466 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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