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The given maps illustrate two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cities

The given maps illustrate two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cities Bgr29

As can be seen from the chart, there have been as different as chalk and cheese between two underground tunnel systems in two Australian cities. They have not been similar not only distant time or place but also size and environment. The first tunnel was built under a suspension bridge between 1986 to 1998 with cost $555 millions while the latter located beneath highway was spend $1, 1 billion being constructed over period time 2002 to 2006. Looking at the map in more detail, system under bridge has been encompassed by sand but environment of the tunnel beneath highway has been stone and clay. Regarding the first tunnel, its maximum length is 2, 2 kilometers, and it can be up to 1, 5 meters deep, so it only allows two to go parallel. The next system has been twice as big as that tunnel with 3, 6 kilometers long and 2, 5 meter deep, so three cars having same speed can easier to move

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 size and environment.

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tunnel
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tunnel
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