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The given illustration depicts the Grange park plan in 1920 and today. Modernised arrangement has significant changes since then.

The given illustration depicts the Grange park plan in 1920 and today. Modernised arrangement has significant changes since then. e5ABG
The given illustration depicts the Grange park plan in 1920 and today. Modernised arrangement has significant changes since then. The fountain has had the considerable change to remove from the park centre to the corner of the park in the shape of realistic water feature, where it was a glasshouse before. One Rose garden has been moved to the centre instead, surrounded with seats. Children’s play area and a new café replaced the old garden and pond. A new underground car park with entrance has facilitated private transport vehicles. The other dramatic development is the musicians' stage, which has been transformed to the spacious amphitheatre for concerts. While just a small group of people could be fitted inside the old stage, outdoor amphitheatre has huge capacity to organise large crowds on the rounded benches. The park tranquillity is enhanced in general, nevertheless the size of it has not been changed.
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illustration depicts the Grange
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park
plan in 1920 and
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today
.
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arrangement has significant
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changes
since then.

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change
to remove from the
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park
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centre
to the corner of the
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park
in the shape of realistic water feature, where it was a glasshouse
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before
. One Rose garden has been
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moved
to the
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centre
instead
, surrounded with seats. Children’s play area and a new café replaced the
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old
garden and pond. A new underground car
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park
with entrance has facilitated private transport vehicles.

The other dramatic development is the musicians' stage, which has
been transformed
to the spacious
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amphitheatre
for concerts. While
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a
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small
group of
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people
could
be fitted
inside the
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old
stage, outdoor
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amphitheatre
has huge capacity to
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organise
large crowds on the rounded benches. The
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park
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tranquillity
is enhanced
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,
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the size of it has not been
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changed
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IELTS essay The given illustration depicts the Grange park plan in 1920 and today. Modernised arrangement has significant changes since then.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
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