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Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?

Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer? OVROj
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about various aspects of cars, and if should be viewed as a positive or negative impact to people. While it is possible to claim that some people prefer large size cars, while others prefer a small one; my view is that the small cars advantage outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of argument. Firstly, there are several reasons why small cars are considered to be advantageous to people. One of them is that it consumes less fuel, and it is more economical for urban areas. Secondly, it can also be argued that less amount of fossil fuel is burned by a combustion engine. Emission emitted by compact cars are very low as compared to large cars. It should also be taken into account that small cars are suitable for urban areas. It takes less space in parking. Those who argue for big cars have a different kind of view and say that it can actually be a good thing. While, it is claimed that large car provides more interior space for passengers. We can carry a lot of things or luggages with large car. In addition, it is suitable for uphills. In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that size and shape of car is more important. I would strongly recommend that small car has more benefits than large car economically.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between
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people
about various aspects of
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cars
, and if should
be viewed
as a
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positive
or
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negative
impact to
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people
. While it is possible to claim that
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some
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people
prefer
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large
size
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cars
, while others prefer a
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small
one; my view is that the
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small
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cars
advantage outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall
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explain
my point of view by analyzing both sides of argument.

Firstly
, there are several reasons why
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small
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cars
are considered
to be advantageous to
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people
. One of them is that it consumes less fuel, and it is more economical for urban areas.
Secondly
, it can
also
be argued
that less amount of fossil fuel
is burned
by a combustion engine. Emission emitted by compact
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cars
are
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very
low as compared to
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large
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cars
. It should
also
be taken
into account that
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small
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cars
are suitable for urban areas. It takes less space in parking.

Those who argue for
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big
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cars
have a
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different
kind of view and say that it can actually be a
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good
thing. While, it
is claimed
that
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large
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car
provides more interior space for passengers. We can carry
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a lot of
things or
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luggages
with
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large
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car
.
In addition
, it is suitable for uphills.

In conclusion
, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that size and shape of
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car
is more
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important
. I would
strongly
recommend that
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small
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car
has more benefits than
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large
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car
economically
.
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IELTS essay Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?

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  American English
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250 words
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