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the given chart illustrate renewable energy's consumption in the Us in 60 years from 1949. Looking at the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that renewable energy total consumtion was increased over the time scale. It can be seen from the chart, the Hydroelectric power is the most popular energy. However, it witnessed an fluctuation from 1949 to an early 1980s and then hit a low at nearly 2 quadrillion BTU before reached a peak at nearly 4 quadrillion BTU in the late 1990s and then decreased to nearly old bottom. The wood nearly unchange from 1950 to 1970s and then witnessed a significant decrease and peak of nearly 3 quadrillion BTU in the late 1980s before decline and stable at the end of the time scale. Biofuels and wind are the new renewable energy which developed in 1980s. However, it witnessed a dramatic upward trend over the time scale and it will be forecast to become future renewable energy.
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energy's consumption in
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the Us
in 60 years from 1949. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that
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renewable
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energy
total
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consumtion
was increased
over the time scale. It can be
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seen
from the chart, the Hydroelectric power is the most popular
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energy
.
However
, it witnessed
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fluctuation from 1949 to an early 1980s and then hit a low at
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2 quadrillion BTU
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reached a peak at
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4 quadrillion BTU in the late 1990s and then decreased to
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nearly
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old
bottom. The wood
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from 1950 to 1970s and then witnessed a significant decrease and peak of
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nearly
3 quadrillion BTU in the late 1980s
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before
decline and stable at the
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end
of the time scale. Biofuels and wind are the new
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renewable
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energy
which developed
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IELTS essay the given chart illustrate an renewable energy

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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