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the function of stone jars

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The lecture and the reading passage are both about the purpose of the stone jars. The reading passage presents three theories about the jar's function. The lecturer argues that the purpose of jars is uncertain. The lecturer claims are not in agreement with that of the reading passage. First of all, the reading states that the jars may be constructed by some kings to ferment beverage. In contrast, the lecturer claims that this theory is not true. He says people used clay pots for fermentation in the past and even though they could use stone pots, but it was too expensive and difficult to make that stone pots. So, there is no need to use these stone jars for fermentation because they could use clay ones and the clay pots were more efficient. Secondly, the reading passage points out that stone jars may be used as a water supply especially during dry seasons and those jars are located near trade routes. The lecturer argues that this theory has a very low possibility. He says despite the fact that these jars are located near trade routes but there are some rivers near these routes. Though, there is no need for additional water supply near these routes. Finally, the reading asserts that the stone jars may be kind of tombs, and founded artifacts in jars can increase the possibility of this theory. On the other hand, the lecturer believes that this theory has one main problem. He points out that usually tombs have covers to protect the human remaining from stealing and there is no cover in the stone jars.

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reading
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lecturer
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near
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Finally
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stone
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jars
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jars
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theory
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