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In most of the cities and towns of all the world the most major issue is high volume of traffic.what are the causes and actions for this issue

In most of the cities and towns of all the world the most major issue is high volume of traffic. what are the causes and actions for this issue dp31p
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IELTS essay In most of the cities and towns of all the world the most major issue is high volume of traffic. what are the causes and actions for this issue

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
211 words
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