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The forests are being cleared all over the world. What are the reasons behind it and what are the effects of it? Give some measures to solve this issue.

The forests are being cleared all over the world. What are the reasons behind it and what are the effects of it? Give some measures to solve this issue. 6lYLW
Deforestation has been increasing at an alarming rate across the globe. there are various factors which held responsible to cause this issue, that will be discussed in upcoming writings along with effects and solutions to alleviate this problem. To begin, with reasons behind the deforestation. The first and most obvious is population growth. Since the population has been rapidly increasing, and they must require shelter in order to survive, forests are being cleared in order to provide living space for all dwellers. Secondly, bush fire can be considered as major cause for this problem. Last but not the least, in present days forests are getting harmed by numerous industrialist for establishing their new projects. For example, cooperative people wants to expand their business to cater the customer demands and for this purpose they need ample space to create more infrastructures and consequently they tend to cut forests to make their share in the market. Moving towards the adverse effects of, Deforestation. The most prominent is, Global warming. Due to excessive cutting of forests for the greed of human, climate is uncertainly changed and this unnatural change in weather leads to rise in temperature. When temperature inclined at high level it melts the glaciers and invites natural calamities which may enough to demolish the man kind. In addition to it, this problem has bad effect on the wild life. Number of animals and birds are dependent on forests for their inhabitants, when there is no forests for such a natural creations, their life may be in danger and coming generation remain underprivileged to see such marvelous creation of almighty. However, there are several solutions which can be adopted to reduce this problem. Firstly, government interruption can be proved as fruitful to mitigate this issue. As government make strict regulations against who are clearing the forests illegally by imposing some financial penalty. Besides this authoritative people should come forward to make sure all safety measures are enough to stop if situation like bush fire happened. Furthermore, there should be an implication of comparative social responsibility principle for industrialist to take care of forests while establishing their infrastructures In conclusion, forests are getting harmed in order to meet the requirements of increased population numbers along with human’s unnecessary interruption in nature’s principle. It is having bad impacts on wild life and the temperature of earth, Nevertheless this problem can be minimized by collaborative endeavors by both government and society.
Deforestation has been increasing at an alarming rate across the globe.
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there
are various factors which held responsible to cause this issue, that will
be discussed
in upcoming writings along with effects and solutions to alleviate this problem.

To
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begin
, with reasons behind the deforestation. The
first
and most obvious is population growth. Since the population has been
rapidly
increasing, and they
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must
require shelter in order to survive,
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forests
are
being cleared
in order to provide living space for all dwellers.
Secondly
, bush fire can
be considered
as major cause for this
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problem
. Last
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but
not the least, in present days
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forests
are getting harmed by numerous industrialist for establishing their new projects.
For example
, cooperative
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people
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wants
to expand their business to cater the customer demands and for this purpose they need ample space to create more infrastructures and
consequently
they tend to
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cut
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forests
to
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make
their share in the market.

Moving towards the adverse effects of, Deforestation. The most prominent is, Global warming. Due to excessive cutting of
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forests
for the greed of human, climate is
uncertainly
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changed
and this unnatural
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change
in weather leads to rise in temperature. When temperature inclined at high level it melts the glaciers and invites natural calamities which may
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enough
to demolish the
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man
kind.
In addition
to it, this
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problem
has
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bad
effect on the wild life. Number of animals and birds are dependent on
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forests
for their inhabitants, when there is no
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forests
for such a natural
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creations
, their life may be in
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danger
and coming generation remain underprivileged to
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see
such marvelous creation of almighty.

However
, there are several solutions which can
be adopted
to
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reduce
this
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problem
.
Firstly
,
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government
interruption can
be proved
as fruitful to mitigate this issue.
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As
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government
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make
strict regulations against who are clearing the
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forests
illegally
by imposing
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some
financial penalty.
Besides
this authoritative
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people
should
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come
forward to
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make
sure all safety measures are
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enough
to
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stop
if situation like bush fire happened.
Furthermore
, there should be an implication of comparative social responsibility principle for industrialist to take care of
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forests
while establishing their infrastructures

In conclusion
,
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forests
are getting harmed in order to
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meet
the requirements of increased population numbers along with human’s unnecessary interruption in nature’s principle. It is having
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bad
impacts on wild life and the temperature of earth,
Nevertheless
this
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problem
can
be minimized
by collaborative endeavors by both
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government
and society.
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IELTS essay The forests are being cleared all over the world. What are the reasons behind it and what are the effects of it? Give some measures to solve this issue.

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