Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The following things will make me a strong candidate

The following things will make me a strong candidate Rw0xV
The following things will make me a strong candidate: Teamwork skill One of my strong skill is teamwork. I has a natural ability to fit in. I usually make positive contributions and build good relationships with everyone. I’m sure that I usually complete my deadline in time because I will feel not good in someday if my work has not finished. If I finish my work, I’m willing to help and encourage my co-worker to complete his assignment. Leader skill Next skill that I’m always about to study is leader skill. I always suppose that “A good leader will meet good members, an excellent leader will meet excellent members”. So that I remind myself to study by all my heart to become a leader that I want to be. Moreover, I used to be a leader before. I usually encourage others and took a project through to success. I have an experience for it.
The following things will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me a strong candidate:

Teamwork
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill


One of my strong
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
is teamwork. I
Possible agreement error -- use base form here: "have", "haven".
has
a natural ability to fit in. I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
contributions and build
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
relationships with everyone.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m sure that I
usually
complete my deadline in time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I will feel not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
in someday if my work has not finished. If I finish my work, I’m willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and encourage my co-worker to complete his assignment.

Leader
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill


Next
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
that I’m always about to study is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
. I always suppose that “A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
members, an excellent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
excellent members”.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
I remind myself to study by all my heart to become a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
that I want to be.
Moreover
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. I
usually
encourage others and took a project through to success. I have an experience for it.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The following things will make me a strong candidate

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts