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The following flowchart shows information for obtaining a license.

The following flowchart shows information for obtaining a license. rQm2
The flowchart reveals the step by step procedure to obtain a driving license. To begin with, the first step is to go to the driving center. Then a form is filled up for an eyesight test. If a person fails in this test then he is not eligible to get the license. If the test is passed then one needs to pay the fees for written test. After that, the written test is taken. If someone fails to clear this test then he needs to reappear in exam at no cost. Further, if he fails the test then he is required to retake the test with fees. Furthermore, after qualifying for the written test, a driving test is taken. One needs to retake the road drive test if he fails to clear the test in the first attempt which includes fees. Finally, after passing the road drive test, one is successfully eligible to obtain the diving licence. Overall, the license obtaning process is lenghy in which passing the eyesight test is essential.
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step by step
procedure to obtain a driving license. To
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begin
with, the
first
step is to go to the driving center. Then a form
is filled
up for an eyesight
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test
. If a person
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fails
in this
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test
then he is not eligible to
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get
the license. If the
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test
is passed
then one needs to pay the fees for written
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test
. After that, the written
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test
is taken
. If someone
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fails
to
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clear
this
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test
then he needs to reappear in exam at no cost.
Further
, if he
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fails
the
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test
then he
is required
to retake the
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test
with fees.
Furthermore
, after qualifying for the written
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test
, a driving
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test
is taken
. One needs to retake the road drive
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test
if he
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fails
to
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clear
the
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test
in the
first
attempt which includes fees.
Finally
, after passing the road drive
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test
, one is
successfully
eligible to obtain the diving
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licence
.
Overall
, the license
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obtaning
process is
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lenghy
in which passing the eyesight
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test
is essential.
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IELTS essay The following flowchart shows information for obtaining a license.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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