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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. b19Y
Nowadays, people travelling to different countries spend their time like vacation and holiday has been a trend to experience the culture and natural beauty of part of the world. Many people believe that traveling abroad has a negative impact on the country and others oppose it. i would like to discuss both views in the following paragraphs. Out of all reasons, tourism is very essential for any country which improves revenue to the government pocket and generates new jobs. Nowadays many people prefer to tour other countries because they are curious about diverse cultures by geographical boundaries. People want to explore places and improvements of standard living. One of the main benefits of foreign currency is the spending of our country and economic increase. For example Dubai and Switzerland are famous tourist places in the world because Switzerland has more natural beauty and hill stations and Dubai has a famous monument i. e. Burj Khalifa. Also, Desert Safari, Dubai Marina etc. On the other hand, many people believe that some negatives can also be pointed out like child abuse, drug and prostitusion work to forien visitors. Sometimes they implement foreign culture at home like living in relationships at home. It has a negative impact on children. sometime tourists damage some precious things which save our old-age. It's a negative impact for the country. Moreover, If people travel in native country instead of foreign country it can preserve the country's tradition and their children should get knowledge of their own culture and about its history. In conclusion, if people follow the rules and regulations of their country it solves the problem and they enjoy living standards.
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spend their time like vacation and holiday has been a trend to experience the
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culture
and natural beauty of part of the world.
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people
believe that traveling abroad has a
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negative
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country
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and others
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would like to discuss both views in the following paragraphs.

Out of all reasons, tourism is
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essential for any
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country
which
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improves
revenue to the
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government
pocket and generates new jobs. Nowadays
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many
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people
prefer to tour other
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countries
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because
they are curious about diverse
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cultures
by geographical boundaries.
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People
want to explore places and improvements of standard living. One of the main benefits of foreign currency is the spending of our
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country
and economic increase.
For example
Dubai and Switzerland are
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famous
tourist places in the world
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because
Switzerland has more natural beauty and hill stations and Dubai has a
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famous
monument
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Burj
Khalifa.
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, Desert Safari, Dubai Marina etc.

On the other hand
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believe that
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negatives can
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prostitusion
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visitors.
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Sometimes
they implement foreign
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at home like living in relationships at home. It has a
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negative
impact on children.
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sometime
tourists damage
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some
precious things which save our
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old
-age. It's a
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negative
impact for the
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country
.
Moreover
, If
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people
travel in native
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country
instead
of foreign
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country
it can preserve the country's tradition and their children should
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get
knowledge of their
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own
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culture
and about its history.

In conclusion
, if
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people
follow the
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rules
and regulations of their
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country
it solves the
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problem and
they enjoy living standards.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

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