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The flowchart below shows the process of obtaining by-products from rice plant

The flowchart below shows the process of obtaining by-products from rice plant 757NA

The given flowchart depict the simple process of getting by products from rice crop. Overall it is a man made process in this process rice straw has and brain are extracted as waste material and mid size is obtained at the end of the process first of all the processes chapter with showing the Rise when rice plant a plant is ready to harvest the harvesting is done in this process paddy is collected as product and rice straw is occurred as garbage for the Paris kept for drying the dried paddy is father send to store in next the Stored paddy is dispatched in mail for next process in milling process mailed midsize are obtained the

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