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The flowchart below shows the process of obtaining by-products from rice plant

The flowchart below shows the process of obtaining by-products from rice plant 757NA
The given flowchart depict the simple process of getting by products from rice crop. Overall it is a man made process in this process rice straw has and brain are extracted as waste material and mid size is obtained at the end of the process first of all the processes chapter with showing the Rise when rice plant a plant is ready to harvest the harvesting is done in this process paddy is collected as product and rice straw is occurred as garbage for the Paris kept for drying the dried paddy is father send to store in next the Stored paddy is dispatched in mail for next process in milling process mailed midsize are obtained the
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crop.
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it is a
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man
made
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in this
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process
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rice
straw has and brain
are extracted
as waste material and mid size
is obtained
at the
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end
of the
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process
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the
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chapter with showing the Rise when
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rice
plant a plant is ready to harvest the harvesting
is done
in this
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process
paddy
is collected
as product and
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rice
straw
is occurred
as garbage for the Paris
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kept
for drying the dried paddy is father
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send
to store in
next
the Stored paddy
is dispatched
in mail for
next
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process
in milling
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process
mailed midsize
are obtained
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IELTS essay The flowchart below shows the process of obtaining by-products from rice plant

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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