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Nowadays most of the people wants to buy a brand items of clothes, cars or other things. Give reasons and discuss the positive and negative effects of it.

Nowadays most of the people wants to buy a brand items of clothes, cars or other things. Give reasons and discuss the positive and negative effects of it. PWGjX

In the present scenario, most of humans wants to purchase a popular variety of clothes, motor vehicles or other items. I will discuss about their reasons and the negative effects of buying brands. To commence with, there are numerous reasons for purchasing a branded items such as Nike, Adidas and in cars like KIA, Hyundai. All these famous items are good in quality and they have a long time capacity. Mankind buy popular items due to they represent their financial status. As compared to others, they feel proud on themselves after purchasing branded items. Studies by World Trade Organisation shows that the people who have branded items, they tend to reduce stress and give onself a satsification. On the contrary, it is cluster clear that all the popular items are expensive. Some people felt that it is a wastage of money. On the other hand, most of the families could not afford to give branded items to their children. That is way, they feel jealous with their friends. Even in some areas, children fight with their parents and compel them for buying popular items. Although it is surveyed that, the people who have Branded Items, will not have a money for investment. To conclude, human but these items according to their necessary not to show her status. If they want branded items, the result of it not good at all.

In the present scenario, After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the humans") or simply say "most humans".most of the humansmost humans
most of humans
 wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
 variety of clothes, motor vehicles or other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
. I will Did you mean simply "discuss their"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss their
discuss about their
 reasons and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects of buying brands.

To commence with, there are numerous reasons for purchasing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
branded
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "item"?item
items
 such as Nike, Adidas and in cars like KIA, Hyundai. All these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).quality, and
quality and
 they have a long time capacity. Mankind Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "buys".buys
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 due to they represent their financial status. As compared to others, they feel proud on themselves after purchasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
. Studies by World Trade Possible spelling mistake. 'Organisation' is British English.Organization
Organisation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
, they tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and give Possible spelling mistake found.oneselfon self
onself
 a Possible spelling mistake found.ratificationfalsification
satsification
.

On the contrary
, it is cluster This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 are expensive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 felt that it is a wastage of money. On the other hand
, most of the families could not afford to give You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 to their children. That is
 way, they feel jealous with their friends. Even in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas, children fight with their parents and compel them for buying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionablefavoredfamousattractivebelovedtrendy
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
. Although it is surveyed
 that, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
Branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
Items
, will not have Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "money".money
a money
 for investment.

To conclude
, human This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 according to their necessary not to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 her status. If they want You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstigmatizetaint
branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
, the result of it not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at all. 