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The first time we try something can be exciting, frightening, and enlightening. Tell about an important "first" in your life and what you learn from the experience.

The first time we try something can be exciting, frightening, and enlightening. Tell about an important "first" in your life and what you learn from the experience. GMqoj

Beginning to swim in the water was my first moment to get a healthier body, I started to swim about 7 years ago, when It is really hard for me to lose weight. It is might be a little strange to anyone who heard my story. For me, it is such an exciting experience to get rid of the fear of water, because i need to get my body healthier than before. In my experience, learning to get rid of fear something can makes your life more easier than before.

Beginning to swim in the water was my first
 moment to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a healthier body, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to swim about 7 years ago, when It is really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to lose weight.

It is might be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 strange to anyone who heard my story.

For me, it is such an exciting experience to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of the fear of water, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my body healthier than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. In my experience, learning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of fear something can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "make"make
makes
 your life Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.easier
more easier
 than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. 