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The figure illustrates the process involved in the generation of electricity with the support of a wave energy machine and the options for installing it in two different locations.

The figure illustrates the process involved in the generation of electricity with the support of a wave energy machine and the options for installing it in two different locations. 75jNY
The figure illustrates the process involved in the generation of electricity with the support of a wave energy machine and the options for installing it in two different locations. The wave energy machine takes the support of waves in the water, which produces a flow of air in to the machine from the bottom end and the flow of air from the top to actuate the electricity generator, which results in the formation of electricity. The simple mechanism of it involves two chambers with two rotary fans in one chamber and an air flow regulator in the second at the bottom. The air flow created by the wave and surrounding environment moves the rotary fans. This rotary fans in turn actuates the turbine. This mechanical energy supports the electricity generator to produce electricity. The two different location options for the machine installation have it's own outcomes. If installed in a location with lower water levels helps in reducing the installation costs but generates a low output. A higher output can be created at a location with increased water level supporting larger waves but results in inclined costs for installation.
The figure illustrates the process involved in the generation of electricity with the support of a
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and the options for installing it in two
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The
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energy
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takes the support of
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in the water, which produces a
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flow
of
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air
in to the
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machine
from the bottom
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end
and the
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of
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air
from the top to actuate the electricity generator, which results in the formation of electricity.

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The
simple mechanism of it involves two chambers with two rotary fans in one chamber and an
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air
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flow
regulator in the second at the bottom.
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The
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air
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flow
created by the
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wave
and surrounding environment
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moves
the rotary fans. This rotary fans in turn actuates the turbine. This mechanical energy supports the electricity generator to produce electricity.

The two
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different
location options for the
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installation have
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it's
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outcomes. If installed in a location with lower water levels
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helps
in reducing the installation costs
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generates a low output. A higher output can
be created
at a location with increased water level supporting larger
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waves
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results in inclined costs for installation.
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IELTS essay The figure illustrates the process involved in the generation of electricity with the support of a wave energy machine and the options for installing it in two different locations.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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